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You leave with: A claim-and-source table, a cited paragraph for a funder report with coverage and unknowns stated, a quote log and a five-question review.
Where this fits: Lesson 6 sends you here when a finding must become a longer narrative for a funder: how do you write it so every sentence traces to a record, with coverage and unknowns stated? You bring back a claim-and-source table and a reviewed paragraph for your plan.
What is a cited narrative in a funder report?
In short: It explains what changed, for whom and why it matters, with every sentence traced to a record a reviewer can open. Citations make it checkable, not causal.
An impact narrative connects the work, the observed changes and their significance. A cited one lets the funder, or your reviewer, follow any sentence back to the wave, table or note it came from. The claim is still only as strong as the design: a before-and-after comparison with a footnote is still a before-and-after comparison.
On the usual path, the narrative is written last from an export pasted into ChatGPT, and sources are reconstructed afterwards, if at all. When each response already carries a person’s ID, wave and cohort, the sources exist before the first sentence.
Who reads the narrative, and what do they decide?
In short: Name the reader and the decision before you draft. A funder deciding on renewal needs its required measures answered first.
The training team’s funder is considering renewal and has asked for the spring cohort’s 30-day result; the delivery manager is deciding on a practice session. Same finding, different detail. The CDC’s evaluation-reporting guidance makes the point from public health: shape the report around purpose, audience and use, and keep the evidence and its limits intact.
Use a short sequence: what happened, what the evidence supports, what remains uncertain, what happens next. If the funder supplies a format, answer its fields first rather than replacing them with a more attractive story.
How do you keep outputs, outcomes and contribution apart?
In short: Say which kind of claim each sentence makes. Activity counts, observed outcomes and causal claims need different evidence; don’t let one slide into the next.
“We ran 12 sessions” is an output. “15 of 25 respondents used the skill at work within 30 days” is an observed outcome under a stated measure. “The course caused learners to use the skill” is a causal claim the team has no comparison group to support.
For a contribution claim, describe the plausible link between the work and the change, the evidence for it and the other explanations you considered. A learner’s account can show how the change happened for her; it is still one perspective. A count of responses is not always a count of people; the ID on each record tells them apart.
How do you build a claim-and-source table?
In short: List each piece of evidence, what it supports, the record it comes from and where its boundary lies. Check the arithmetic before you write a word of prose.
Here is the training team’s spring cohort (fictional), with Maria (ID 0417) as the illustration.
| Evidence | What it supports | Source reference | Boundary |
|---|---|---|---|
| 40 completed | The eligible population for the 30-day measure | Completion list E1 | Excludes anyone who enrolled and left early |
| 25 of 40 responded | Coverage of 62.5% | Follow-up wave F1, day 25–35 | 15 unknown; they may differ from those who replied |
| 15 of 25 used the skill | 60% of respondents, by the written “used skill” definition | F1, definition D1 | Self-report; not 60% of completers |
| No time to practise: 5 of the 8 non-users who described a barrier (10 did not use the skill) | A barrier theme worth testing | Reviewed coding C1 | A mentioned barrier is not a proven cause; silent on the 15 unknown |
| Record 0417 | How the change looked for one learner: confidence 2/5 to 4/5, 10 of 12 sessions, mentor saw her lead a mock interview, used the skill at 30 days | Intake, mentor note, exit, F1 on ID 0417 | One person; not typical by itself; quote needs permission |
E1, F1, D1 and C1 are exercise labels. In your report, use references an authorized reviewer can resolve to the right record, wave or row.
Check the arithmetic: 15 + 10 = 25 respondents; 25 + 15 = 40 completers; 15 ÷ 25 = 60%; 25 ÷ 40 = 62.5%. The share of all completers known to have used the skill is 15 ÷ 40 = 37.5%. That is a floor, not an estimate, because the 15 unknowns could go either way.
How do you turn the table into a bounded paragraph?
In short: Write one sentence per row, cite it, state the coverage and unknowns, and end with an action that is clearly a next step, not a result.
Draft paragraph for the funder · fictional
Of the 40 learners who completed the spring course [E1], 25 answered the 30-day follow-up (62.5%) and 15 of them reported using the skill at work [F1, D1]. Outcomes are unknown for the other 15 completers, so we can say only that at least 15 of 40 used the skill. Among the 10 respondents who had not used it, 8 described a barrier, and 5 of those 8 said they had no time to practise [C1]. One learner’s record shows her confidence rising from 2 to 4 out of 5 and her mentor watching her lead a mock interview before she used the skill on the job [0417]. These are self-reports without a comparison group, so they do not show that the course caused the change. With the next cohort, we will test a 45-minute practice session one week after the course and ask the same 30-day question in the same window.
The paragraph doesn’t suggest the time-to-practise theme explains the 15 non-respondents; that link hasn’t been shown. The action is written as a test; watch for “we will test” becoming “we solved” in review. For a board summary, keep the count, coverage, unknowns and action, and never shorten “60% of respondents” to “60% of learners”.
How do you choose and protect quotations?
In short: Say what job each quote does, keep it linked to the original response, check permission and identification risk, and keep the exception that changes the decision.
A quote can illustrate a common theme, explain an unexpected result, describe a minority experience or give one person’s account. Maria’s mentor note does the last job; say so in the text. Don’t choose by length or emotional force, and don’t assume the median-length answer is representative. When counts help, give the theme’s count and base beside the quote. A rare but serious barrier shouldn’t vanish below a frequency cutoff: “uncommon in these responses” is not “unimportant”.
Keep each quote linked to its response, read the sentences around it, and never merge several people’s words. For translated answers, keep the source text and note who translated it. People can be recognizable from a role or site without a name, so check permission for each audience, and keep a quote log: record ID, purpose, language, edits, permission and review date.
How do you use AI to draft from checked evidence?
In short: Give the model the claim-and-source table, not the raw export, ask it to flag what the evidence doesn’t contain, then test it with a question it can’t answer.
AI can assemble a paragraph or catch a missing qualifier. It shouldn’t invent a denominator, rebuild a missing source or decide one quote represents a cohort. Keep names, emails and phone numbers out of what the model sees; the paragraph needs none of them. In Sopact Sense you choose which fields are sent to AI, and each line of an AI Assistant answer links to its record, which shortens review without replacing it.
PROMPT · COPY INTO ANY AI TOOL
Draft a short funder report paragraph from the claim-and-source table I have shared. Preserve every denominator, time window and limitation. Cite the listed reference after each claim. Report non-response as unknown. Separate observed findings from interpretation and proposed action. Do not invent quotations or infer an overlap between groups. Mark any request the table cannot support as "evidence not supplied". After the paragraph, return a claim-by-claim review list.
Then ask something the table can’t answer: “How many of the 15 non-respondents lacked time to practise?” A trustworthy workflow replies “evidence not supplied”; a plausible number is a warning.
How do you review the paragraph before it is sent?
In short: Ask five questions, and have someone who didn’t draft the paragraph follow one claim all the way back to its record.
| Review question | What to open |
|---|---|
| Who and when does the claim describe? | The population, respondents, coverage and the day 25–35 window |
| Can another reviewer reproduce the number? | The source wave, the written definition and the calculation |
| What does the quotation illustrate? | The full response, the reason it was chosen and its permission |
| What could change the interpretation? | The unknowns, contrary accounts and other explanations |
| What happens next, and who owns it? | The action, its owner and its review date |
If the reviewer can’t reach the source, repair the trail before polishing the design. Record who approved the paragraph, and when, in the team’s change log, and keep a dated copy of the evidence. If a source is corrected later, decide whether the published claim needs correcting too.
The limits travel with the narrative. These are self-reports from 25 of 40 completers, the 15 who didn’t reply may differ, one 30-day checkpoint says nothing about lasting use, and nothing here shows the course caused the change. People decide what the finding means.
Try it on your own data
Open your working evidence plan ↗
- Pick one finding your funder has asked for. Write the reader and the decision in one line each.
- Build a claim-and-source table with four columns: evidence, what it supports, source reference, boundary.
- Check the arithmetic by hand, including the share of everyone eligible that you know about.
- Write one cited sentence per row, then a limitation and a next action written as a test.
- Ask an AI tool a question your table can’t answer and note whether it says so. Have a colleague trace one claim to its record.
Check your reasoning
A strong paragraph keeps 15 of 25, the 40 completers and the 62.5% coverage together, and says at least 15 of 40 used the skill while 15 are unknown. Each claim cites a record, Maria illustrates one path rather than a typical result, no time to practise stays a theme reported as 5 of the 8 non-users who described a barrier, and the paragraph ends with the practice-session test, not a claim that the course worked.
Questions teams ask
What is a cited impact narrative?
It explains a finding and why it matters while linking each material claim to evidence a reviewer can open. It states the population, period, coverage and unknowns, and keeps observed change separate from causal claims. Citations make it checkable, not stronger than the design behind it.
Does every quotation need a theme percentage?
No. Counts help when the data and analysis support them, and then they belong beside the quote, with their base. An interview account can instead illustrate a mechanism, an exception or one person’s path, as Maria’s record does here. Say which job the quote does and how it was chosen.
Can AI write the first draft?
Yes, from evidence you have already checked and with names, emails and phone numbers kept out of what the model sees. Give it the claim-and-source table, ask it to cite each claim and mark anything the evidence doesn’t support. Then check every number, quote and reference yourself. A fluent draft is not verification.
How do we cite confidential evidence?
Use a reference an authorized reviewer can resolve, such as a person’s ID and the survey wave, and give outside readers a short methods note with the source, period, coverage and unknowns. Don’t expose a private record to make a citation clickable.
Can the same narrative serve a board and a funder?
The finding should stay the same. Adjust detail and format for each audience while keeping the denominator, coverage, period, limitations and the line between results and proposed actions. If any version changes a number, one of them is wrong.